英検１級用練習
ライティング
2024/01/16
2022年度第2回
目標時間20分
かかった時間28分
目標単語数200-240
実際の単語数227
反省点→
①bring a positive impactの言い換えとして、bring about, create, achieve, generate, fosterなどがあったので使いたい
②contribute to realizeのような使い方をしてしまった→contribute to realizing ~ にすべし
③SDGsのことをSustainable Developmental Goalsと書いてしまった。正しくはDevelopment
よかった点
①単語数が程々よかった
②三つの例（教育・会社・国際社会政府）＋具体例（SDGs教育・トヨタのような大企業の取り組み・国連によるパリ協定などの取り組み）が浮かんで助かった
お題
theme
agree or disagree: human societies will always have a negative impact on the environment.
condition is
200-240 words,
three reasons to support an answer
以下が文章です
I disagree with the statement. While human societies have brought negative impacts on the environment, it will not be continued forever. Currently some societies have begun to create positive impact on the environment.
First, in terms of education, recent focus on environmental education has had a positive impact on children at school. Especially in Japan, more attention is paid on environmental education with SDGs, sustainable development goals. Students are now aware of environmental issues and are taught to be responsible for the future.
This education and educated generation will bring a positive effect on the earth from now on.
Second, companies can play a crucial role in bringing a positive impact on the environment. For example, a car company in Japan has two actions to preserve the environment. One is to plan a lot of trees and expand them around Japan. This will increase the amount of forests, increasing the Oxygen. Second is to produce electronic cars which can work with electricity and much less burden on the environment compared with former cars with gasolines.
Third, not only school and company, but also each country are working together to bring a positive impact on the environment. Most countries have agreed to a global promise limiting the emission of greenhouse gases. This global tackling with environmental issues will also contribute to realizing a sustainable society in the future.
From these three reasons, I disagree with the statement.
ありがとうございました！
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